CC outline
Chinese education are different from American education in several side.
① First of all, Chinese student learn harder in high school than in college, but the American students are just the reverse.
A. Chinese students have to study hard to get into the college because of the incredible population, in contrast, America has far less population.
B. There are too many colleges in American so American students do not have the stress of getting into a college.
②Second, lots of Chinese college students do not work hard in their college life, but in America, college students who really want to study work very hard.
A.In china, students works very hard in the past years so most of them relaxed when they get into colleges which is rare in America.
B.American students are always highly interactive with the instructor. But in China, students prefer to sleep on the lecture.
CE outline
Thesis statement: Playing too much computer games will bring some bad results to a student.
①You have to face to the computer screen for a long time when you are playing computer games, so it's bad for your health.
A. obesity
B. harmful to eyes
②Using a lot of time to play computer game will also affect your study.
A.do not have time to study
B. Still think about games when at class
③You may have some communication problems after year by year's playing
A.your nature may become more aggressive because of the fighting game
B.do not have time to talk with friends
Xiufu, I want you to work on the C&E paper, but I should say you'd better be more specific about the thesis statement. Clarify the side effects that playing too much computer games brings in the theses statement in terms of three different aspects: health, studying, and communication skills, etc. (you can change the words.) Of course, you should change the topic sentences accordingly. :) Good luck!
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